2nd Feature Article draft

Smoking

This essay will be about Smoking. Why it's bad. Why people have a habit of smoking cigarrettes. And why people don't stop. If someone smokes in your family, you should tell them to stop immediatly cause their putting their life in serious danger. Every year , all lot of people die.

Smoking is one of the worst things kids or adults can do to their bodies. But, every single day,
about 4,000 kids between the ages 12 through 17 start smoking. Almost every year more then 1,000 people die from smoking cigarretes.

Homophone poem

Im funny
your not.
I have something
you haven't got.

You knew.
That was true.
Because, I
was always better then you.

subject-verb agreement

People have behaved really excited at a time when I went to London last summer. I think they were excited because I didn't see them for a long time, and they didn't see me for a long time either. I also think they were really excited because I came from the US. And that they came from London, so that they wanted to know much about me as possible.I was really happy to when I saw them. Cause I missed them so much. And allot of my cousins were there.