Friday, January 15, 2010

2nd Feature Article draft

Smoking

This essay will be about Smoking. Why it's bad. Why people have a habit of smoking cigarrettes. And why people don't stop. If someone smokes in your family, you should tell them to stop immediatly cause their putting their life in serious danger. Every year , all lot of people die.

Smoking is one of the worst things kids or adults can do to their bodies. But, every single day,
about 4,000 kids between the ages 12 through 17 start smoking. Almost every year more then 1,000 people die from smoking cigarretes.

Friday, November 20, 2009

Questions for my feature article interview:

Questions for my feature article: Smoking.

1. Do you think if people smoke, they would have a better life? Why or why not?

2.Did you ever smoke?Did you think it would make you a better person if you did?

3. Thousands of people die from smoking almost every year, do you think they did the right thing to smoke?

4.Do you think about smoking sometimes?

5.If you saw one of your family members smoking, would you tell them to stop, or would you start smoking to?
Why or why not?

6. If someone tells you that it's cool to smoke, would you agree and start smoking? why or why not?

7. Do you smoke, if so, how do you feel to smoke?

8.When people around you smoke, do you say something to make them stop? Why or why not?

9. Do you think cigarrete companies should stop making cigarretes?

10.When people ask you if you smoke, do you say yes, just to be cool, or be honest and say no?

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Homophone poem

Im funny
your not.
I have something
you haven't got.

You knew.
That was true.
Because, I
was always better then you.

Friday, November 13, 2009

Who can I interview and where can I find information?

I would interview the Secretary of Education because he might have information about Smoking. And I would interview a grownup in the school who used to smoke alot and stopped.

The place I can find information is at:

1: http://www.kidshealth.orh/parent/positive/talk/smoking.html

and

2: http://www.quitsmoking.about.com/od/teensmoking/a/teensmokefacts.html


2 facts on each of the webpages:

1:Tells about how many people smoke every year.
Why it's bad

2

Monday, November 9, 2009

subject-verb agreement

People have behaved really excited at a time when I went to London last summer. I think they were excited because I didn't see them for a long time, and they didn't see me for a long time either. I also think they were really excited because I came from the US. And that they came from London, so that they wanted to know much about me as possible.I was really happy to when I saw them. Cause I missed them so much. And allot of my cousins were there.